조로와 루피의 관계는 꽤 흥미로웠고 글을 잘 썼어요. 몇 가지 문법 문제가 있었지만 그 외에는 훌륭한 작품이었습니다. 녹색 팬더 챕터.

The relationship between Zoro and Luffy is rather interesting, and you did a good job on writing about it. There were a couple of grammar issues, but other than that, it was a great piece. greenpanda chapter.