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"The song needs to be tightened up, build to the chorus faster. I could have sworn the lyrics were Dean Pitchford-ish when I heard it before. Then Bernie slapped that 1976 date on it. Wow. I could see the the Raspberries recording this song at a medium tempo beat a la \"Sleep With Me\". Wally could do some nice guitar fillers in between the lyric phrasing...Some background \"Oohs\" during the build up...Maybe a harmony vocal during the chorus...  Add \"Devil...\" and \"Cindy...\" get the best compositions from the last 30 years from the other guys...AND GET IN THE STUDIO and record a new 'Berries CD.   \n"
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