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"I googled this topic because I’ve become so pissed off at a Kindle Unlimited author whose suspense series has a formula I kinda like but whose writing is so horrific I’m getting migraines. He begins sometimes several in a row sentences with present particles. ( Realizing he’s alive, he takes a deep breath. Wishing the moon was made of green cheese, he looks up) Pretty much this bad. Thanks o your post I realize not all ING phrases are bad writing. Without exception, this guys ING phrases can be dropped without losing a thing except his boring, repetitive rhythm and useless verbiage."
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