Effective Mechanism to Mitigate Injuries During NFL Plays
NFL(American football),which is regarded as the premier sports icon of America, has been severely accused in the recent years of being exposed to dangerous injuries that prove to be a bigger crisis as the players* lives have been increasingly at risk. Concussions, which refer to the serious brain traumas experienced during the passage of NFL play, have displayed a dramatic rise in the recent seasons concluding in an alarming rate in 2017/18. Acknowledging the potential risk, the NFL has been trying to fight via NeuroIntel AI mechanism as well as modifying existing game rules and risky play practices to reduce the rate of concussions. As a remedy, we are suggesting an effective mechanism to extensively analyse the potential concussion risks by adopting predictive analysis to project injury risk percentage per each play and positional impact analysis to suggest safer team formation pairs to lessen injuries to offer a comprehensive study on NFL injury analysis. The proposed data analytical approach differentiates itself from the other similar approaches that were focused only on the descriptive analysis rather than going for a bigger context with predictive modelling and formation pairs mining that would assist in modifying existing rules to tackle injury concerns. The predictive model that works with Kafka-stream processor real-time inputs and risky formation pairs identification by designing FP-Matrix, makes this far-reaching solution to analyse injury data on various grounds wherever applicable.
The study analyzes NFL data to mitigate injuries of NFL players. Methods such as K-NN, XGBoost, and SVM are used for the analysis and predictive modeling. Although the research is important for NFL and sports industries, there are several problems as an ICLR paper: First, it is not formatted correctly. I guess using single column, the content may be overlength. Second, the methods used in the paper are conventional and there is no novelty from the algorithmic perspective. Third, the findings is useful within the sports industry, but does not conveys much insight for the ICLR community.
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Effective Mechanism to Mitigate Injuries During NFL Plays
NFL(American football),which is regarded as the premier sports icon of America, has been severely accused in the recent years of being exposed to dangerous injuries that prove to be a bigger crisis as the players* lives have been increasingly at risk. Concussions, which refer to the serious brain traumas experienced during the passage of NFL play, have displayed a dramatic rise in the recent seasons concluding in an alarming rate in 2017/18. Acknowledging the potential risk, the NFL has been trying to fight via NeuroIntel AI mechanism as well as modifying existing game rules and risky play practices to reduce the rate of concussions. As a remedy, we are suggesting an effective mechanism to extensively analyse the potential concussion risks by adopting predictive analysis to project injury risk percentage per each play and positional impact analysis to suggest safer team formation pairs to lessen injuries to offer a comprehensive study on NFL injury analysis. The proposed data analytical approach differentiates itself from the other similar approaches that were focused only on the descriptive analysis rather than going for a bigger context with predictive modelling and formation pairs mining that would assist in modifying existing rules to tackle injury concerns. The predictive model that works with Kafka-stream processor real-time inputs and risky formation pairs identification by designing FP-Matrix, makes this far-reaching solution to analyse injury data on various grounds wherever applicable.
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<think>Okay, to do a decent peer review, I should start with summarizing what the work is about. This includes novelty, contributions, clarity, and impact. I might include suggestions to issues that I find critical to the usefulness of the work. Starting with novelty, there are different types of novelty. The first aspect of novelty is scope and scale. Is the work covering a broader perspective than previous works? The second aspect is methodology. Is the proposed methodology novel compared to previous methods? Do they provide any significant advantage over previous methodologies? The third aspect is results. Are the results different compared previous work? Does this lead to any novel theories or an extension of current theories? Next is clarity, I will be reading the work in depth and analyze if any sentences can be potentially ambiguous or misleading. If any sentences are ambiguous, I will state them and give a suggestion on how to rephrase such sentence or how to make more clear to the audience. Lastly, impact is important. I will attempt to predict how such work will impact the scientific community. This might include the applications of such work and how the work might transform the way we study a certain topic. Finally, I will might only mention issues that are critical. This is to keep the review as concise and helpful as possible.</think>



The study analyzes NFL data to mitigate injuries of NFL players. Methods such as K-NN, XGBoost, and SVM are used for the analysis and predictive modeling. Although the research is important for NFL and sports industries, there are several problems as an ICLR paper: First, it is not formatted correctly. I guess using single column, the content may be overlength. Second, the methods used in the paper are conventional and there is no novelty from the algorithmic perspective. Third, the findings is useful within the sports industry, but does not conveys much insight for the ICLR community.
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The study analyzes NFL data to mitigate injuries of NFL players. Methods such as K-NN, XGBoost, and SVM are used for the analysis and predictive modeling. Although the research is important for NFL and sports industries, there are several problems as an ICLR paper: First, it is not formatted correctly. I guess using single column, the content may be overlength. Second, the methods used in the paper are conventional and there is no novelty from the algorithmic perspective. Third, the findings is useful within the sports industry, but does not conveys much insight for the ICLR community.