text: I am 18 years old living in Kang-Dong. (sounds ok)\nI have grown up between my mother, who is an accounting clerk of a small firm, and my father who is a child counselor. (better to only say: My mother is an accounting clerk of a small firm, and my father is a child counselor.)\nI don't have any elder brother or little sister. I am a only son. (simplify: I have no siblings) \ntherefore, I think I am very shy. (I think that is why I am very shy)\nMy family was not poor, I did not feel a sort of feeling of lack nor I don't live well. (My family was not poor, so I did not have a feeling of lack or my life was not well.)\nMy mother had taken care of my today's clothes or packing bags until I graduated a middle school. (My mother always took care of my daily clothing, moreover she packed my bags until I graduated from secondary school)\nI could not wear myself unless she allowed. So, only after with her permissions, I was comforted. (Without her permission, I could not choose even what to wear.)\nI don’t know whether that makes it or not, but I have not ever come a department store alone. (Probably for the same reason, I have never been to a department store by myself.) \nShe bought to me for my clothes. (She would shop for my clothes)\nI was ashamed of myself buying alone. (I was ashamed of shopping alone) and I was afraid of going here and there alone by bus. (and afraid of taking a bus ride by myself)\nSeeing my figures, I sometimes seem hear that people’s whispered tales. (I did not understand this sentence but whispered tales mean "urban legends" in english)\nBut as I become an adult, and I made up my mind to have an adventure. (But once I became an adult, I made up my mind to have an adventure)\nSo I took a bus going to a department store. (So I took a bus ride to the department store)