text: It looks like you put a lot of work into it. It's functional, but you need to improve on the aesthetic appeal it seems a bit "canned, or cookie cutter, or like one in a million others". It needs more personality at a glance and less dry text. If I had to grade it on a scale of 1-100 I would give you about a 47 because of the "spread sheet look". Overall, good work though. I say all this not to be negative, but just give you feed back.