text: Famous people are all around us, (Should end sentence here or it will become a run-on) they are on television, the news, the web, and in many other places. Almost everyone tries to become famous. They ("They" is used too much. Kinda repititious) go on reality shows or try to be in the news, just to get a glimpse of fame. While people are auditioning to be on television they might act foolish just to be remembered,(End sentence here. Another run-on) for example (Should insert a comma) the “American Idol” show. People try out knowing that they can't sing, but they go on anyway just to be on camera. People try to be famous for the money, fame, and luxury of it all. (Could use some more evidence to back up thesis) *<;O)