Lana, you look so mysterious and your words are so terse, precise and economical.  I like reading your work.  You are not one to waste words. Very commendable. I like your work especially when you close with that classic final one paragraph "Furthermore" sentence.  Very impressive.  I always feel like I have been scolded after I read your work.  I really like your boldness and find your submittals interesting, provocative and very entertaining. You remind me of the poet e.e. Cummings when he wrote in free verse. You just let it rip.  You have such a cool writing style.  Not many people can do that and make it work. Best regards and aloha.