text: Can you correct this text for my fantasy novel? Please add details and tidbits from standard fantasy troupes, internal monologue, feelings, descriptions, etc. Make text longer. Do not continue the story. This text: "As they approached an open square, they paused to survey the area. It was mostly empty except for some stone rubble and the remains of a few bonfires likely left by the ogres. The ground was paved with cobblestone, and streets led in and out from the square in all directions. They debated what to do, as moving across the square would be risky, leaving them exposed in plain view with little cover. Skatir suggested they move quickly straight over, to minimize the time spent in the open. However, as they made their way halfway across the square, they spotted something that made their blood freeze. At the end of one of the streets leading out of the square, they saw the attack sentry busy searching and scanning a nearby building for surviving ogres. "