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Never say, “Lose fat in 30 days,” when you can say, “Become bikini ready in less than a month.” “Lose fat” is a concept, so the brain will ignore it. “Bikini ready” is sensory-focused. When you read “bikini ready” your brain pictures what “bikini ready” means and then compares that to you. This is