After Howard finished with the fourth draft we delivered the translation to the publisher, whose editors marked it up. We then made further changes based on their comments, although we didn't accept all their suggestions.
將第四稿交給出版社編輯，編輯看完後，我們再針對編輯的意見和想法修改、潤飾（不一定全部採納編輯的意見），此為第五稿。