The problem is not in the writing itself, but in the fact that it has never changed and constantly repeats itself. This is particularly the case with regard to Taiwan. The subject matter has become increasingly narrow, the descriptions cruder, and her writing more and more resembles the stringing together of newspaper headlines. It lacks detail and patient construction.
如此寫法本身並沒有什麼問題，問題出在陳年不變、一再反覆，尤其寫台灣的部分題材愈寫愈窄，內容愈寫愈粗糙，愈來愈像報紙標題的堆砌，缺乏細節骨肉的耐心營造，這就讓人無法完全接受了。