"This one's a very good likeness, drawn intuitively, with a very simple and direct feel to it. The top half of this next one is very strong, but from the nose downward it's weak--perhaps his ambition flagged and he didn't have the confidence to draw the details of the lips. They could almost be two different drawings.
「這張畫和本人很像，用直覺畫法，感覺很樸素；這張畫上半部比較強，鼻子以下弱了，企圖心可能降低，不敢把嘴唇細節描出來，讓人感覺好像是兩張畫… …」。