Hmm. Not too bad, Naubol. Erm... just a few things I want you to fix up.<br/><br/>First, your armor is a tad bit too strong to start with. Try reducing its power to 2.<br/><br/>Second, you'll need to make a seperate character sheet for Reth to turn into using her shapeshifting powers. Pretty much, I'll let you shapeshift without using MP. If you are KO'd, killed, whatever in a shapeshifting form, you'll revert back to regular Rethen and lose the ability to turn back into that form for 2 fights.<br/><br/>Third... 5% of your HP is a tad low... you may want to consider 50% or even as low as 25%, but considering you cannot heal Reth through normal means, I'd choose 50% myself.<br/><br/>Fourth... wouldn't Reth have two leg guards instead of one? Akaida, I'm allowing Nau to use a specialized weapon, considering his character is best off kicking at opponents. Also, a power of 12 is a bit high to start with. Try lowering it to around... 5, or 7 at the highest. This way, when it adds to your Power, it will make your power around 12... unless that's what you were doing already.<br/><br/>Lastly. Fifth... Rethen has 250 EXP to start with, and 500 Gold. That's about it.<br/>~~~<br/>Alright. Going to consider calling some others through PMs and seeing if they too would want to play. Other than that, we can start. Follow my lead as I give an example of what I'd like your opening post to be. In it, I'd like your character name, a brief bio, a title for that character, and finally your opening post.<br/>~~~<br/>Name: Jordan'Altania Jacylyn Trashantra (AKA 'Jori')<br/>Bio: The daughter of a late martial arts expert and a vorish monster called an Engulf, Jori uses her psychic and martial arts to help people as best as she can.<br/>Title: Spiritclaw<br/><br/>Jori stood at the old castle Mateo, looking upward. It was a stormy day that day in the lower sections of Northern Onnako. She had been commissioned by the Governer of the capital city, Ronnagan, to handle a would-be cultist activity. Such an activity was the creation of a false god known as an Eidolon. Jori had a bad feeling this would be more than a mere Eidolon slaying, however; maybe it was her sixth sense, or maybe she was just anxious due to the eerieness of the abandoned castle, but she knew SOMETHING was up.<br/><br/>On the bright side, her friend Rethen would be accompanying her on this quest, along with an unknown fighter named Conn. Jori recalled the first day she took Rethen to her realm. Smiling softly, she stood, ignoring the wetness of the downpour, awaiting her friend and the warrior's arrival.