(Hello, lavawolf, but I have a few criticisms I'd like to make.  For one thing, Zaana and Nova aren't making out, it was only a kiss on the snout.  Second of all, don't use internet speak such as "omg" or "lol" or the emoticons in your sentences, since that isn't proper and it makes your sentences look like a messy text message.  Thirdly, there was no crash, and we (or rather, I) would appreciate it if you did not make up events, such as said crash.  Lastly, my OCD will kill me unless you stop using asterisks to indicate actions (unless you still want to use them, in which case, you can), but instead type out sentences that includes things like "he said", "she said", or "he replied" like you see in books and novels.  Okay?  Sorry if I make you 'mad' or anything, but just wanted to tell you that.)