<blockquote><div><cite>GrimWolfReaper wrote:</cite>The mew continued to pleasure her, Pinky was determined to make Sakura enjoy this as she worked her way into Sakura's womb.</div></blockquote><br/><br/>Look at your post, then look at mine.<br/><br/><blockquote><div><cite>SakuraHanaryuu wrote:</cite>"Theres a good...girl" Sakura ghasped as Pinky squirmed her way up into her, leaning forward and pressing her arms over her stomach as she clenched her fangs, she shuffled her hips as pinky tossed about up through her insides, then when her nose poked through into her womb her back arched, and she fell back onto her arms, eyes wide, her swollen stomach still bulging out between her legs. She fell back, limp against the boulder huffing, her eyes turning dreamy and her breath warming the air so much it grew visible. The small claws of her feet clenching at her vast rump, and her tail wrapped around the boulder behind her slowly gripping it harder as she huffed with each movement from the little pokemon within her.</div></blockquote><br/><br/>I'm only saying you could be posting a bit more to beef up your input into the scene. Examples 'what your character is thinking', what she herself is feeling physically, any unique urges pinky might have at this time, what does sakuras insides feel like against her paws, ect. Expand your partners viewpoints. Also when possible add texture and surroundings to the scene ex soft dewy grass or small stones  only a smaller pokemon would notice.