OC<br/><br/><blockquote class="uncited"><div>(You know I get y'all's characters and all need to know of mine to interact but seriously everyone's making my character worse than I made him I ment for more of stealth and illusion great at escaping and all but everyone is making him seem like he's an amateur at being stealthy Im making his strongest talent which he uses to win his fights stealth and yall are making it like it's terrible stealth making my character out of his league cause he no longer has his stronge talents it's like someone making a guy all buff and very strong but not the brightest to balance him out and yall make him weak then he's just a usless character you take away the one thing that defines him I mean I can be ok with the beast maybe smelling perhaps a sight of mine or a little sound but you making it like my character is stomping around not even trying to be stealthy I mean it's like oh hey your guys all about brute force well I'll have my brainiac that's a complete wimp beat him in a arm wrestle so I can interact with your character instead of letting you get yours to interact with mine and everyone's characters stay the same with their skills, sorry for complaining I just needed to get it out of my system)</div></blockquote><br/><br/>Please, let me explain a few things.<br/><br/>Let's start from that last scene: I'm not negating or ignoring your character's talents. Malifaith did not see him at first, and then could only see its blurred outline (because that's what happens when it moves in invisibility, according to your profile); so, I'm not making up powers or denying yours to make your character worthless. Malifaith has a good sight, expecially in darkness, and is actively searching for something "wrong" to explain the steps it heard, the forced door and the black smoke. Maybe an excellent rogue/ninja can run silently at a moderate speed, but surely not so well when he's actually escaping as fast as he can from something else; and you're wearing a scale armor if I remember well. And you forced or broke the door, and that's not something you can do quietly.<br/><br/>And, basically, since you changed your previous action just to accomodate it with my arrival, I assumed that you actually wanted your character to interact with mine. But how could they interact if Shadow just invisibly sneaked in front of Malifaith, and Malifaith just looked around puzzled? I recognized your character's features. Malifaith didn't hear him and didn't catch him, and decided not to pursue him knowing that it would be probably a failure. That's it.<br/><br/>Aside from that, allow me to point out that your character is actually full of VERY powerful feats. You can summon the "deepest fears" of others and create illusions of towering monster; also, you are godlike with a bow and "one of the most skilled" with daggers, and pretty good with a sword.<br/>So what do you expect from other players? Should their characters crumble down in desperation when your Shadow disappears and just wait for your killing strike, because "otherwise your character is worthless"?<br/>I myself made a quite powerful character, but it's also crippled with limitations.<br/><br/>Also, I'll take this chance to ask you a favor: could you please put a little more effort in your writing? I often find it very hard to understand your descriptions. I'd appreciate a lot if you could put more care in punctuation and phrase structure.<br/><br/>I hope these lines don't feel too harsh. I'm making some critiques - constructive ones, I hope -, but I hope you can read them in the most friendly tone.