"Why can't I hit you?!" Charles yells spinning as his wings of light become a giant blur as they move torwards her.<br/><br/>"WHY?! So you can hurt my friends again?" Bob asks yelling as he lands by Nytheria.<br/><br/>Max just smiled and shook his head. "This will truly be interesting."<br/><br/>((Constructive....constructive.....nope none really. The spelling was fair, the dialouge and sotry moved along smoothly. The only thing I would probably have dones was put in some more detail, but thats about it.))