Here's my version of the prologue and a little of the first chapter.<br/>Please be kind i threw this together in like 5 minutes i was just bored : D<br/>Tasmali<br/>________________<br/>Prologue.<br/>"Crap" Genina Washington muttered, as she looked down at her wristwatch. 12:30 the face of the clock proclaimed in little green letters. She had been attending a football game, at her school Tasmali high. Then she had left the after party early in an attempt to be home on time. Her house was about six miles away, she would have to hurry to meet her 1:30 curfew. Genina broke into a slight jog while pondering to herself. "I should consider myself lucky some kids parents don't even let them stay out past 10:00"<br/>The pavement under her feet  was cracked and grass was coming up in random places across it, the buildings around her we're dark and foreboding. Tasmali was like that, some places were lively and upbeat. Other places like these slums, were not to say the least. Sweat dripped down her face as she began to jog a little faster. Then something  appeared behind her. She turned around quickly, she had to struggle to see what it was. It looked like he regular background of the city, but it was moving. Like someone had just dropped a rock in a pond. The reason she noticed it was because of an odd ringing sound, like a buzzer being held down. She moved closer to and touched it. Her finger tips disappeared she quickly drew back and found her fingers intact. She pulled out her cell-phone  hoping to call the police, when suddenly something jumped out of the ripple, a large dog like creature. It landed on Genina knocking her cell phone out of her hand. The creature looked down at her it had red glowing eyes and patches of scales on it’s canine like face. It licked her face, covering her with it’s saliva. She tried to push it off, managing to slightly budge it, giving her enough room to roll under it.<br/>She stood up and so did the thing. It stood about 2 heads higher than Genina. The creature blocked off both of her escape routes. But she quickly turned around and ran into an alley. The creature followed. She had to find some way to escape it. She turned to her left a door!<br/>Genina feverously tried to open it. “Locked!” She exclaimed tears, streaming down her face. She picked up a large rock and  began to hit the lock. To no avail. The creature stopped and stared at her, she threw the rock at it. It didn’t even faze the creature. It lunged at her, but she managed to quickly duck, and the creature missed her, hitting it’s snout against the back wall with a tremendous, thud and a yelp. She ran towards the exit to the alley way. But a frog like tongue reached out and grabbed her by the ankle knocking her down. Her wrist was broken, she could tell.<br/>The tongue began pulling her closer, and closer to the creatures, waiting, salivating maw.<br/><br/>The creature had been playing with her. It could of done this earlier, but it took some kind of morbid pleasure from toying with her.<br/>She reached it’s maw and the creature swallowed her whole.<br/><br/><br/>Chapter 1 :  Detention, missing persons report, blockbuster, first sighting.<br/>Kitse Burnes, sat in his reading class bored and tired. His curly brown hair and glasses, sat in a state of disarray, as he had been toying with them as he sat in class. Allison, his girl friend passed him a note. “I’m bored” It proclaimed in large Red letters, the period was replaced with an angry face. Kitse looked at her with a tell-me about it face. She smiled at him, and he smiled back. The class bell rang finally, and Kitse hurried ly exited, the classroom. He found allison and began to walk with her.