(Yogos, I am fairly certain I asked for all posts to be at least 3 sentences. I don't know why, but I really HATE short posts. They are so nondescriptive and boring... Another thing, vore isn't a huge thing in this world, just on this island. Also you failed to say what your character was doing before Reiko saw him, surely he didn't just come out of thin air. Not to mention you left his description at a bare minimum, leaving out things like hair color, height, weight, and other such things. All I'm saying is I would very much appreciate it if you would help us paint a mental image of him, describe what he's doing and thinking, and put a little more effort into punctuation(If you don't speak english very well then please say so and you can disregard a majority of what I've said).)