((I'm not one to give advice about roleplays, considering my the best roleplay I ever made only lasted six pages, but if this were mine, I'd take myself out of first-person perspective and put alot more detail into the first post(not necessarily on the gas part...). The best part of roleplaying is making your character, describing him, and giving him a personality. I'm sure you'd be able to rope in a few RPers with just a bit more effort on this first post.))