それは良い話ですが、ほとんどの場合、信じられないほど恥ずかしがり屋の人は自分が魅力的であることを認識しておらず、自分の美貌に対する自己認識の欠如は、彼らの恥ずかしさへの重要な貢献者です。その情報に基づいて書き直すことはできますか？
That's a good story but most of the time people who are incredibly shy don't recognise they are attractive and their lack of self-awareness about their own good looks is a significant contributor to their shyness. Can you rewrite it based on that information?