それは本当に暗いです。私は子供たちにその話をしませんでした、これはどんな子供の話ですか？それも短いです。子供の就寝時の物語に適した物質を備えた物語を書いてください。
That's really really dark. I wouldn't tell that story to my kids, what kind of children's story is this? It's also short. Please write a story with some substance to it, that is appropriate for a children's bedtime story.