sentence: With the purpose of attracting more people to join the club , besides its good points , I would highly recommend that they should arrange the time suitably and avoid they hold the activities to avoid problems .
modified: With the purpose to actract more peole to join in the club , besises its good points , I will highly recommend that they should arrange the time suitably and avoi they hold the acivities to avoid the problems
transformation: PART, SPELL, SPELL, PREP, SPELL, VERB:TENSE, SPELL, K, SPELL, DET, PUNCT