sentence: As I 've also run the marathon three times and play in the local netball team , I am quite energetic , plus , I 'm also hardworking , as I try my best to achieve my ambition .
modified: As I 've also ran the marathon THRICE and play in the local netball team I am quite energetic plus I 'm also hardworking as I try my best to reach my ambition .
transformation: VERB:FORM, OTHER, PUNCT, PUNCT, PUNCT, PUNCT, VERB