sentence: As far as I 'm concerned , we will be submerged by too many tools which will replace manpower and craft . In addition , globalization will destroy the cultural traditions of each country .
modified: As far as I 'm concerned we would be submerged by too many tools which will replace manpower and craft , in addition the globalization will lose cultural traditions of each country .
transformation: PUNCT, VERB:TENSE, PUNCT, PUNCT, DET, VERB, DET