If you follow my suggestions, you'll have a very spare, Zen-like presentation, which is great to convey who you are and get people emotionally involved, but not good as a handout.
如果你听从了我的意见， 你会有个很成功的演讲，有力的传递 你是谁，同时还会调动人的情感。 但是它和讲义不一样。 你需要有个详细的讲义，