Fix grammaticality: Well, there's my bed next to the window, a TV in the font of it and next to the tvs my desk and when I realised the room would were mine I decided to buy a computer and put it in my sisters's desk (it's next to my desk too) you know, I been thinking, it been very important during girls like us to having a computer now a days.
Well, there's my bed next to the window, a TV in front of it and next to the TV my desk and when I realised the room would be mine I decided to buy a computer and put it on my sister's desk (it's next to my desk) you know, I was thinking, it's very important for girls like us to have a computer nowadays.