Fix grammar: In my openion, if we wanted to be a succeeded in our life, we should works with others, despite examples: when someone wanted to make a presentations in schools or at the universities, he should make it in others, within he will know other openion and towards he shares what he had with other he will has a good presentation, and maybe within he donen't know english very will and he have got a mistakes, other people can helped him.
In my opinion, if we want to be a success in our life, we should work with others; for example: when someone wants to give a presentation in school or at university, he should do it with others, because he will know other opinions and if he shares what he has with others he will have a good presentation, and maybe if he doesn't know English very well and he has made some mistakes, other people can help him.