Fix grammar in the sentence: As we know if we taken the ideas that are suggeting to let people leaving schools when they being 14 or 16, we will sees many young people in the street who are behaving bad carecters, upon example they can becoming easily drug dealers, gungs or thought on bad way, so I think those ideas I mentioned above do not helps to protects our young people to follow the bad rutes that can effect the safty of our community.
As we know, if we take up the ideas that are suggested, to let people leave school when they are 14 or 16, we will see many young people in the streets who are behaving badly carecters, for example they can easily become drug dealers, join gangs or think in bad ways, so I think those ideas I mentioned above do not help to prevent our young people following the bad ways that can affect the safety of our community.