Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Including film from other nationalities, that originally are or had is translated into English - shown a films may not be encouraging enough for people to joined the clubs, so new activity around member can are added, as discussions about the films shown or quiz - emphasised in the adverts the possibilities to come to see the film for being a member of the club, but promoted the advantatges of becoming one (especially economic ones, but also the chance to participate in all the activities) - Offering to non-member a free subscription for one months During this second years, the aim of the club is to grow even more, and to improves, towards that members would getting satisfied.
Including films from other nationalities, that originally are, or have been translated into, English. - Showing a film may not be encouraging enough for people to join the club, so new activities for members should be added, like discussions about the films shown or quizzes. - Emphasising in the adverts the possibility to come to see the film without being a member of the club, but promoting the advantages of becoming one (especially financial ones, but also the chance to participate in all the activities). - Offering to non-members a free subscription for one month. During this second year, the aim of the club is to grow even more, and to improve, so that members are satisfied.