Fix grammaticality of the sentence: However, it may be true through us to have price weakness within I mentioned concerning SWOT Analysis comparing to non-consulting firms, Intelligence, Ltd., Benesse Holdings, Inc., TOYO KEIZAI INC., and etc, because they usually provided ready-made services products.
However, it may be true for us to have price weakness, as I mentioned in the SWOT analysis in comparison to nonconsulting firms, such as Intelligence, Ltd., Benesse Holdings, Inc., and Toyo Keizai Inc., because they usually provide ready-made service products.