Make the sentence grammatical: To: Ms. Sandra Jones, Chief Executive, Carso Plc of: around: jobs satisfaction for the Accounts Department staff Date: Nov 24, 2001 INTRODUCTION As requests, after meeting including my staff and analysed their feeling as regarded the issue of job satisfaction, I hereby submitted my finding on the reason for staffs unhappiness, the effects it having on the departments's work and some insights on how to improve the situation.
To: Ms. Sandra Jones, Chief Executive, Carso Plc From: Re: Job satisfaction among the Accounts Department staff Date: Nov 24, 2001 INTRODUCTION As requested, after meeting with my staff and analysing their feelings as regards the issue of job satisfaction, I hereby submit my findings on the reasons for staff unhappiness, the effects it has on the department's work and some insight into how to improve the situation.