Fix grammaticality of the sentence: I thinking you should go on holidays for your friend before you can has more fun without upon your parents In fact with your friends you can did what you are keen on: swimming, going shopping and going to the disco, instead of having a boring holiday with your parent, who want you to did the same thing they do I hope you will choose what is the best by you
I think you should go on holiday with your friends because you can have more fun than with your parents. In fact with your friends you can do what you are keen on: swimming, going shopping and going to clubs, instead of having a boring holiday with your parents, who want you to do the same things they do. I hope you will choose what is best for you.