Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Also, as the first job is within a restaurant downtown, it will probably being packed with clients and we won't have the chances to spends any time outdoors, whereas across the campsite, not only will we are outside all days long but also have more spare time to be on our own and chats.
Also, as the first job is in a restaurant downtown, it will probably be packed with clients and we won't have the chance to spend any time outdoors, whereas at the campsite, not only will we be outside all day long but we will also have more spare time to be on our own and chat.