Fix grammaticality: Jane and monica, I receive the letter, first you will been loves my countries, it been very beautiful, there are many thing to done, In my opinion I prefer spent my time upon the cities, there are more thing to do, things that teenagers love, there is many nightclubs, shoppings, cinemas, theater, beaches, show, the countryside is nice too, but is more calm, Don't have nightclubs, shopping; in the countryside you will see more farms with animal, after cows, duck, pig, and probabily you can't found teenagers, you will see more old people, the countryside were to relax, and the cities is out fun, meets people, know new places.
Dear Jane and Monica, I have received the letter, first you will love my country, it is very beautiful, there are many things to do. Personally I prefer to spend my time in the city, there are more things to do, things that teenagers love, there are many nightclubs, shopping centres, cinemas, theatres, beaches, and shows, the countryside is nice too, but is calmer. There aren't any nightclubs or shops; in the countryside you will see a lot of farms with animals, like cows, ducks, and pigs, and you probably won't find any teenagers, you will see more old people, the countryside is for relaxation, and the city is for fun, meeting people, and getting to know new places.