Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Thirdly, to my mind the colleges garden shouldn't be replaced by the swimming pools that is planned to being builds, because this garden is a simbol of our college, and also the place where we enjoys our spear time talking over each other and having fun.
Thirdly, to my mind the college garden shouldn't be replaced by the swimming pool that is planned, because this garden is a symbol of our college, and also the place where we enjoy our spare time talking to each other and having fun.