Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Also, foreign mega market chain such as Walmart, Tesco, and Carrefour would liking to participated foreign direct investment into the retail sector when Indian government would permit to do; therefore, the foreign major market chains choose to entered India by the joint venture.
Also, foreign mega market chains such as Walmart, Tesco, and Carrefour would like to make investments into the retail sector if the Indian government would permit them to do so. Therefore, major foreign market chains choose to enter India through joint ventures.