Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Hi, I received your email and I would like says you my opinions I don't known how the scottish school are, but if I were you I attend a large school beyond the centres of towns because you can met a lots of people, of course there will being a lot following sports's activities or musics's activity that you can choose to do and then if you are in the centre of town you can found some funny place where you can went with your friends after school.
Hi, I received your email and I would like to give you my opinion. I don't know what Scottish schools are like, but if I were you I'd attend a large school in the centre of town because you can meet a lot of people, of course there will be a lot of sports activities or music activities that you can choose to do and then if you are in the centre of town you can find some fun places where you can go with your friends after school.