Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: My six years at McKinsey & Company are enjoyable and stimulating, but I realizing my true passion lies in directly promoting/cultivates new technology and business that will profoundly impact society by harnessing my leadership abilities, business acumen and scientific prowess.
My six years at McKinsey & Company were enjoyable and stimulating, but I realized my true passion lies in directly promoting/cultivating new technologies and businesses that will profoundly impact society by harnessing my leadership abilities, business acumen, and scientific prowess.