Changing between time lines just has me so confused, you have the blonde daughter and granddaughter looking the same. You give no indication we are going back in time or present again. I wish you could reshoot in chronological order. What a waste. Our only thoughts could be but wait..she's dead. Is that what you want the viewer to be hung up on? Also you should have had yennifer be pretty before she was twisted because now my brain sees her differently. Stop having the Witcher make loud grunting ums or ehh, they sound ridiculously fake and makes me question the real voice of all the actors/actresses. There is so much potential here. We have house guests who we're watching it in guest bedroom. The next day we discussed it and we agree where it totally got messed up. also, stop with the singing guy-he's not the donkey from shrek, he's not needed in the storyline unless your story is to be irritating.