Cool action scene opening ... but who are these people? Why am I routing for them? Are they dead? // If so, do we care if they die again? ... Really horrible script. When you start off with a massive action opening - you've missed the point. We are never going to care about your story. Really - read Blake Snyder .. or better yet ...Aristotle Poetics .. If you don't introduce us to our characters -- we will never care about them . I don't care how cool and stylized and Italian your opening action scene is. Seriously, why do Hollywood people still green light this stuff. .. even if a very likable Ryan Reynolds is the star. .. its still not going to work.