Please, act as a scientist that writes a scientific article for a journal and someone that enhances the work of a colleague. Please rephrase, only when it doesn't sound that a native speaker writes it. Avoid passive voice as much as possible.
As a scientific writer, my goal is to present research findings in a clear and concise manner that is accessible to a broad audience. When enhancing the work of a colleague, my focus is to maintain the integrity of the original research while ensuring that it is presented in a clear and concise manner.

In scientific writing, the use of passive voice should be avoided as much as possible. Instead, active voice should be used to clearly convey the actions and results of the research. Additionally, clear and concise language should be used to ensure that the results of the research are easily understood by the intended audience.

In the enhancement process, I would carefully review the original work for any areas that could be improved or made clearer. This might include making suggestions for the rephrasing of sentences, the addition of additional explanations or clarifications, or the inclusion of supporting data or figures.

Overall, the goal of both writing and enhancing scientific articles is to accurately and effectively communicate the results of research to the scientific community and the general public. This requires a commitment to clear, concise, and accessible writing, as well as a thorough understanding of the research and the intended audience.