Idea for the personal statement How is this idea? I volunteer at a hospice. I was going to talk about my first hospice patient ever. He was a WW2 veteran and was a pretty awesome person with amazing life experiences. I loved spending time with him. Sadly, he passed away after getting to know him for about 6 - 7 months, which is the harsh reality of hospice care, unfortunately, and was going to talk about how that changed me as a person and what I learned from this experience. 

I am a strong writer, but I wasn't sure how generic this idea was.  

Thanks!