hey, can you please rate this story, and tell me hoe i can improve? here's page one: Chapter One: A Different Life

NAME_1 stood in a stone coliseum, and lightning struck near by. The sky was dark and cloudy, yet there was no rain in sight. There before him stood two figures, and behind them was a big crystal that glowed an eerie blue light. NAME_1 couldn't make out the figures features, for a dark shadow covered them almost entirely. They were both tall, but the one on the right was bigger, stronger, and much more intimidating. NAME_1 felt a hand grab his own, and he looked to his right with a smile on his face. There was someone next to him, but they were also covered in a shadow.  However NAME_1 was able to make out a smile on this person's face. It was a warm, and comforting smile, that took all the worries out of NAME_1's mind. 

He was able to make out a flying creature as well, that seemed to rub its head the other person. The person lifted their free hand, and scratched its chin, before both of them turned back to face the two intimidating figures. They drew their weapons, and got ready to fight, still hand in hand. NAME_1 felt a rush of Adrenalin hit, and he was ready to face off who ever the two were.  The Master Sword in hand-- and the Triforce on both of their hands, one gold and the other pink, glowed brightly. Just then, the smaller enemy figure started to speak. “NAME_1! Wake up!” It exclaimed with a high, young voice. Huh, that's weird. Why would---

*Splash*  

“Aaaahhh!” NAME_1 exclaimed, sitting up fast.  He heard restrained giggling from his left, but he knew who it was, even before looking. He wiped the soaking wet hair out of his face, then looked to his side. There stood NAME_2 ---- with a bucket in one hand, and his face in the palm of the other. NAME_1 face palmed, and groaned loudly, wiping more of his long, soaked hair back out of his face. “NAME_2, why did you do that?” NAME_2 handed him a blue towel to dry off with, then still giggling said, “Mamma said if you didn't get up, that I should dump a bucket of water on your head, remember?” NAME_1 was not pleased. “Well, you should have at least TRIED to wake me up like a normal person first!”  He groaned.