the garnish is hiding the meat. The overall organization appears haphazard. A little more attention to detail would raise the score.
Make it glisten in the box to make it more appetizing.
May be my glasses or the picture itself. I have a 6 on it.
slices look anemic and all meat looks dry.
Bark looks dry, and chunks might look decent, but we can't see that in the pic. Neither could a judge at presentation by the table captain.
Nothing there looks appetizing. everything seems to be hurriedly arranged with very little attention to detail.
This presentation might be good for a Q Joint, but not a contest entry.
Photo not in focus, so taking that into account: it looks dry, and not appealing. The garnish is too much, or meat is too little, and looks pale.