I have been toying with the concept of a material altering spray, just need some critiques for it.
I would love if people would recommend tests or where The Foundation found it. I am still working on it, but I believe that it is a good starting point. Feel free to write tests for this, like what would happen if it was sprayed on a living thing, or a computer, feel free to go crazy.
TrumanStuff, it seems like you haven't posted a sandbox link. Did you mean to put this in ideas and brainstorming?
Uhh, I found their sandbox.
With that being said, the overall idea is not that interesting. They're basically just spray bottles that do stuff. Nothing else to it. I will admit, though, the idea could be very interesting. However, in its current state, there's nothing. Keep working at it and this could actually be a very good SCP.
Sorry I was racing quickly through posting this That issue is fixed now though.
Zachary Maxwell did a good job explaining why this idea doesn't work, but it you decide to keep going with this1 I've outlined my problems with it.
Aside from SPAG issues, the main problem I have with this is just that it's OTT acid and OTT ice water.
Aside from that, I don't see any real reason for this to be Euclid when the containment procedures are just "put them in a box and forget about it."
However, I do take offense to both being put in one locker. If someone opens that locker they now have the ability to effectively end any barriers the foundation has put up and create new ones wherever they want.
There should be another line separation and a space between the colon and SCP.
There's a lot here so I'll just try and re-write it.
When SCP-#-A is sprayed on an animal the organisms have been found to still be alive and capable of locomotion.
Living beings are unaffected by SCP-XXXX-A.
1. Because it can be salvaged, albeit with great effort.
There's just no meat to this.
I don't mean purely because it's short - short SCP articles can still be effective; no matter your perspective on SCP-173 now, the article about it is effective regardless of length.
I mean there's actually nothing here to give a good narrative. It's just a weird set of sprays that do somewhat weird things. There's no story behind them, there's nothing to keep the reader interested. Have you read some of the Series III articles? The site has changed a lot since Series I where things doing things was the norm.
It could, potentially, if you added a lot more of a stronger narrative, be a viable Dr. Wondertainment product. But it does need a lot more work to fit in with all the other articles based on the company. Even if you decide it's not a Dr. Wondertainment product, I'd advise you read some of those articles because there's a somewhat similar idea of a strange product doing unusual things.