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Ai khitan2t ki moi buja nai bt val lagise kabita bur n moi kabita likhu aru april month manat akhan kitap uliyam buli vabi asilu bt last 24 jan mur ata dangar accident hoi gol ji muk atia bisanat pelai thoise. Nijake uri thaka pakhi khajat bandi hoi thaka jen lagi ase. So my drm pasaloi thoi dilu karan mur bad rest bohot din...tathapio man vangi peluya nai... M std of film inst of assam also(jcfti) m also miss my jcfti nw so what vl m do nw? Boring din bur aguyai ahise n goi ase. Aru kiman khimana nai...tathapio jivan2 je ase take loi ako dakhib loisu nidrabihin ratir khapun.......
– Achyot bora [ ***firstname.lastname@example.org ]
We feel sorry for your accident and pray to Almighty for your early recovery. Be part of us and send your poems to AAI. We will love to publish your poem in AAI.
– Editor
Medhir "Dhanshri" bhal lagisa aru Sapna sharmar "tumi koisila" bhal , duitai manar kabita....
– bitupon sharma [ ***email@example.com ]
Parinita Sharmar "pratham pramar akhan sithi" pahilu, Apakhyar ak sundhar upasthapan. basantar agmanat , man prafulita huwa samaiyar katha manat palai , sitar sawaliloi sai jibanar antimaloika kara ie ak paramar apakhya. Pratijan manuhar jibanaloi ana ak luka bhaku aha , karubar manat ie dakoi shas bahuwai. kabitatir bakayar gathani sahaj saral lagata prakitir ak dharana prakat huwa baba manat shas bahaba parisa. Likhika Sharmaloi dhanayabad janaisu.
– bitupon sharma [ ***firstname.lastname@example.org ]
" PRATHAM PREMAR EKHON CHITHI" Writer Miss. Parineeta Sharma The above poem is for Real love , becz it gives us how to creat LOVE from our Heart. Just like Radha, Gopi waiting for Lord Krishna.
– dibakar SutradhaR [ ***email@example.com ]
Kabi kuldip Medhiloi Abhinandan jonalu..Khabortu batori paperot paisilu kintu Kunjon kuldip medhi dhoribo porahe nasilu..
– Abeli Belir Ghat [ ***firstname.lastname@example.org ]
I always like to read the poems of Parineeta Sharma... She is a good writer and i wish her bright future...
– Abhinab Gogoi [ ***email@example.com ]
Parineeta Sharma's beautifully written poem 'Pratham Premor Chitthi' portrays the tenderness and innocence of the first flowering of romance. It also explores the joys and pains related to love and the deep longing to be near the beloved one. A very good piece of poetry by Parineeta Sharma and we expect more such from her in the future.
– Rajib Dutta [ ***firstname.lastname@example.org ]
Parineeta Sharma's Pratham Premor Sithi Wow! So amazing. Excellent use of words, the rhythm, emotions, and the talent. And above all, beautiful use of metaphors…….. Particularly ….'Ujai bhatiowa ekhan nadir nawor mitirali', 'Kadom phular rati hothat gondh powa ….'
– Nirmal Bimal [ ***email@example.com ]
Prothom Premor sithi porhilu.....xaral xabdore bor hundor uposthaponer anubhuti hamuhok jibonta rupot hojai tuli kobiye poripokkotar uman dibo parise.....prothom premor sthi likhiboloi goi ejoni suwalir monor bhab upolobdhi kori pulokito holu ...
– abhijit kr hazarika [ ***firstname.lastname@example.org ]
Good Morning, Khubai bhaal lagil. It is callled " REAL LOVE" Your all poem said something about "LOVE" and I belve u will a Top rated Poet in comming days. Pl dont forget Me about posting.
– Dibakar Sutradhar [ ***email@example.com ]