There were MANY things wrong with this book.Downloading it appeared to be the first mistake.I love ALL types of books, erotica included, bondage is fun and love to read it.HOWEVER, the author spent WAY too much time describing things that could have been summed up in 3 sentences, not 3 paragraphs.Also, LOVE isn't watching your friends play with your woman.That aside, it was just ridiculous.The dialogue was pathetic, you couldn't tell one character from the next, and the lead female was supposed to be this strong woman was nothing but a whiny broad with daddy issues.I would have stopped after the first two chapters, BUT I won't review unless I read the whole thing so I suffered through it.There was nothing STIMULATING about this book in the least, and if I would have paid for it, I would have demanded a refund.The author might be able to do erotica (that hasn't been proven with this book but I'm giving them the benefit of the doubt) but they cannot do erotica with a storyline.
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