If you can handle the suspension of disbelief necessary to enjoy this story (four words: identical twins swap places), you'll get a sweet erotic short story. The author created two characters who - within the unrealistic framework of the story - have understandable motivations and the ending fits with their characters. There was a little too much non-bedroom stuff for it to be completely successful as an erotic work for me, but some readers may enjoy having more background into the characters.
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