First off, I just read above where this story had been re-edited in 2011. If so, why was the revised edition not put on Amazon? This story was truly hard to get through, mainly because I had to keep going back and re-reading many, many sentences because they were huge run on sentences and did not make sense the first time I read them. Secondly, comma or no comma? They were everywhere, almost like the author threw darts at his manuscript and wherever the darts landed is where he put them.The concept of the story itself was interesting, sort of. I just don't know really what to do with this story. I love to re-read my zombie books, but this one you couldn't pay me to even glance at, mainly because it took so darn long to slog through it because of the wordiness and the errors. I gave it 3 stars because it was an original idea, and didn't want to be mean.
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