Great idea.... execution? Not so much... I found it bland, lacking in a lot ways. It was like being at the top of af roller coaster thinking it will be a great ride down, but it turns out to be flat. I know it is short, there is not much time for character building, but what is up with the instant surrender? I liked the description of the ambassador and the overall idea could work as a novel, but after reading this I would not even consider spending money on the novel.
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