Pretty good story line, mostly believable, good character development and fairly interesting. BUT, I was so distracted by all the mistakes. Many typos, jumbled sentences, left out words, and factual errors (trunk in the Jeep) etc., etc. attention to detail is lacking. Lacks the professional touch I was looking for in a good book. I may try one more from this author but maybe not. And, please get rid of the Thesaurus - throwing in a random 50 cent word when the nickel version would work just fine makes the writer look desperate. I can't emphasize how important it is to fix the mistakes.
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