Hiderigami loves manga, loves it so much that he's trying to draw some himself. He takes his finished manuscript to several different publishing companies, but his frightening appearance prevents anyone from accepting it. When he asks Kitaro to go in his place, Kitaro declines. One day, he meets Kakutomi, an associate editor at Weekly Shounen Machine-gun. He does not reject the manuscript on the basis that Hiderigami is a youkai, instead, after evaluating it, he gives Hiderigami guidance on editing it. Hiderigami starts out in high spirits, but every page needs correction. After who knows how many corrections, Hiderigami grows angry. Confronted with the enraged Hiderigami, Kakutomi...!?
It's because you're not conveying
the protagonist's motivations.
.مشاعر الشخصية الرئيسية لا تصلني
Es porque no expresas
 las motivaciones del protagonista.
Es porque no expresas
las motivaciones del protagonista.
Tu n’arrives pas à communiquer
ce qui motive ton protagoniste.
Non c'è nulla, lì, che trasmetta al lettore 
ciò che si muove nel suo cuore.
É porque você não está transmitindo
as emoções do protagonista.
Это потому, что ты не можешь 
донести мотивацию главного героя.