As the creation of their doujinshi enters its peak, Suzuka comes down with high fever. Yuu follows her requests to pick out her underwear, wipe her down, etc., but then she comes at him with an even harder request!
S-So do you think you could redraw these 
so they're a bit more mainstream?
Glaubst du, du könntest
etwas neutraler zeichnen?
¿Podrías dibujar teniendo eso en mente?
¿Podrías dibujar teniendo eso en mente?
Donc vous pouvez faire
autre chose de plus ordinaire ?
A-Allora potrebbe ridisegnarli
di modo che siano adatti a tutti?
Poderia desenhar novamente com
um ar mais normal em mente?
Так что, может, сделаете 
не столь вызывающие иллюстрации?