Now it's time to revise your work. This means improving the
information in your writing. Remember, don't make spelling,
grammar, or punctuation changes. You will do that later. Use the
revision process to: - Rearrange your writing in an order that
makes sense. Use time order by putting events in the order in
which they happened, or order the events from most exciting to
least. - Remove information that doesn't have anything to do
with the main ideas. - Add additional information to better
explain or describe an event. - Replace words and details with
more descriptive words. - Include lots of detail. Schedule a
Peer Review. - Exchange papers with a classmate. - Ask your
classmate to use the Peer Review Checklist below as they review
your writing. - Always remember that this is your work. Don't
make changes unless you feel it will improve the work. A good
oral history revision includes: - a good flow of words, events,
and ideas - an order of events or stories that makes sense. -
the use of few words that are re