Each of the three following samples has sentence structure
errors including (run-on choppy, dangling modifier).1.My mother
baked a cake. She knows I like cake. The cake was for me. The
cake was chocolate with chocolate frosting. 2.I ate the whole
cake it was delicious. 3.Even after eating three slices of the
cake, it was not enough to make me feel full.What is the matter
with each of these examples? How would you rewrite these
sentences to make them sound better? What do you think is the
problem with each of the examples? What is needed to make the
examples sound better? Hello again, always a pleasure to help
with your question. The answer to this one would be (to compare
with your own thoughts) 1. This sentence is choppy and could be
rewritten as Since my mother knows that I like cake, she baked a
chocolate cake with chocolate frosting for me. 2. This sentence
is a run-on and could be rewritten as I ate the whole cake and
it was delicious. Or - I ate the whole cake. It was delicious.
3. This has a dangling m