text: Thank you for taking the time to read this. I’m an amateur writer, and come from no previous coaching. I really appreciate any honest feedback, as I’m still developing and want to improve to give the reader a better experience. Good, bad, neutral, or any advice that you feel my writing did or didn’t do for you. Comments or suggestions are well received! 1. (Parenthesis) the setting 2. \*Stars indicate the voice of the main character in the first person 3. “Quotations” are back and forth conversation between main characters My Date with Tina Turner (Young handsome man is sitting in upscale bar in downtown Chicago. He is set up on a blind date. It’s the spring time, evening on a Saturday night. The year is 2038 . He is sitting at a two top table facing the entrance of the restaurant. A beautiful woman has just walked in. She looks exactly like a former famous actress, Tina Turner) \*Ugh, I think its another duplicate. (Duplicate walks in smiling, acting a little jumpy while talking to the hostess) \*I swear every date I’ve been on in the last 6 months has been like this. Another girl who has paid an exorbitant amount of cash to have every “flaw” they see modified. This one looks like Tina Turner, I’m not certain though, its hard to see in this dim lit place. Screw it, I'm desperate for a girlfriend and at least this one is smiling. Last week I went through a round of scallops with a manic obsessive Courtney Cox. (Standing up he smiles back at her and reaches out to shake her hand. She looks stunning, a 5"10 Tina Turner) M: “Hi Simone, very nice to meet you, you look amazing” S: “Hello, Michael, my you’re not to bad yourself. Are those your real eyes?” M: “Yes, these are my own, given to me by my mother” S: “Oh that is so original of you. As I’m sure you can see I’ve had a few modifications myself” M: “Really? I couldn’t tell. You look gorgeous.” S: “You couldn’t tell? Have you seen *Whats Love got to do with it*?” M: “Ummmm, I don’t think so. Who’s in it?” S: “Tina Turner! She was a big movie star a long time ago. I thought she was the prettiest chocolate girl I’d ever seen” \*Did she just say chocolate girl? M:“Oh right, Tina Turner. Well I think you look beautiful” S:“Thank you. Well, I guess thank Daddy. Hehe. Anyway, if you can excuse me, I’m going to go to the bathroom really quick to freshen up.” \*Freshen up, she just got here? M: “Oh okay, I’ll keep the table warm for us” (She doesn’t listen to this part, and walks away) \*Jesus christ, what is the world coming to. I can’t keep doing this, but I’m so lonely. I’m going to have to backtrack this broad on Truth Finder before she gets back. (Looking on his Smart Device, ) \*So her name is Simone Sampson, she is daughter of Sam Sampson, senior parter at William & Sampson LLP. Lets see if I can get a picture of her, before her procedure. Okay here she is. TRUTH FINDER Simone Sampson: Simone is the head social media marketing director. Her work here over the last 3 years has helped William & Sampson propel as a formidable firm in the tech space. She is the only child of Senior Parter Sam Sampson, and is enjoyed by everyone, bringing a unique flair into the office. Education: St. Principles High School Favorite Hobby: Shopping and Reality TV Picture: Not posted \*Shit. Okay, let me at least see a picture of the Dad at least. (Switches on the website page to her fathers profile on his smart device) &#x200B; TRUTH FINDER Sam Sampson: Senior and founding partner at William and Sampson LLP. Sam Sampson is a well respected lawyer in the greater Chicago area. He has won over 8 figures in settlements and has been ranked #4 Big Business Attorney in the USA, and been featured on Esquire Quarterly. Currently serves as chief board of directors of the “Free Choice” movement, propelling legislature protecting the individuals right to pursue human metamorphosis procedures. Education: De Paul University, BA Political Science Class of 1999 JD: University of Chicago, Class of 2002 Picture: Older and wider gentlemen, bald, caucasian descent (Tina Turner, I mean “Simone” walks back to the table, standing over him) S: “Hi!” M: “Oh hey there Simone” S: “What are you looking at?” M: “Oh just checking my email” (She stairs at him suspiciously) S: “No phones at dinner. Didn’t anyone ever teach you any manners? Hehe, I’ll let it slide this time” M:“I apologize. It won’t happen again.” (They both smile at each other) S: “Hehe, its okay I’m actually on my phone all the time, its part of my job. You see my Daddy has me post all of the pictures on our social media page for his firm.” M:“Oh thats really cool, do you like it?” S:“Yes, I really do. I get to help create the image of our company, get everyone smiling at work and such. Its super easy and super fun” M:“Did you go to school for marketing?” S:“Oh no, I actually didn’t finish college but I was in beauty school for a while. I wanted to do fashion design” (She looks down, obviously those words cutting deep) M:“Well I’m sure you do an awesome job with what you do now” (Still not picking her head up, a tear drops from her eye) S:“Thank you, can you excuse me, I have to go freshen up” (She leaves the table, not looking up obviously a bit distraught) \*This is what is wrong with the world. You have all of these insecure people coming in, paying millions to look like other people, and not even that can make them happy. Part of me feels sorry for her, but the other disgusted, I still can’t believe she said chocolate girl. (15 minutes later) S:“Hi!” M: “Hey Simone, is everything all right” S: “Yes, I’m sorry. Its just I’m just beginning to kind of regret this metamorphosis procedure.” (He looks at her very surprised, she continue’s.) S: “You see, my Dad has always been very embarrassed of me. Ever since I was young, he always acted as if I wasn’t good enough. When I told him my dream of doing makeup, he said I was worthless to him and that I was throwing away a career of taking over his firm. I know this a lot to kind of throw at you, but it is the truth, and I’ve had to deal with it my whole life.” (He begins feeling empathetic to her) M: “You know I come from a family with a lot of pressure as well. I can completely understand how you feel. I’m sorry your Dad made you feel that way. In all fairness, I think it takes a lot of courage to go through with that procedure. I know I definitely couldn’t do it” (Grabbing his hand she leans over and kisses him passionately on the lips which he receives startlingly) S: “Thank you” (2 hours later and a few more martini’s the two are now out in the city walking down the street hand in hand dancing to music playing off of his phone. The song he is playing is “This will be” by Natalie Cole) \*Wow, this girl is unbelievable and she’s beautiful. She’s the heir to a multimillion dollar law firm, and genuinely has a good heart. Since letting her guard down she’s really shown her true colors. Well not literally.... I swear when she’s kissed me, I’ve never felt so much power. (His phone starts vibrating in his pocket. Call from Keaton his best friend. He ignores the call.) S: “Hi so this is my place” M: “I’ve had a really good time with you tonight Simone” (She pulls him in again for one more kiss, in one swift motion Simone dips him on his back and then pulls him up, kissing passionately) S: “Thank you for tonight, lets do this again sometime” M: “Are you sure you don’t want me to walk you up” S:“Hehe I’m not ready for that yet, give me a few weeks” (Simone leaves slamming the door behind her. His phone starts ringing again. It is Keaton) M:“Keaton I think I’m in love” K:“You’re not going to believe this” M:“What?” K:“Check your phone” (Opens up a new message from Keaton) &#x200B; TRUTH FINDER Simon Sampson: Simon is the head social media marketing director. His work over the last 2 years has helped William & Sampson propel as a formidable firm in the tech space. He is the son of Senior Parter Sam Sampson, and is enjoyed by everyone, bringing a unique flair into the office. Education: St. Principles High School Favorite Hobby: Shopping and Reality TV Picture: Muscular colorfully dressed man in thirties, balding, caucasian (Meanwhile his phone is still playing.....