text: I'm writing a story about losing a lover and I dont know how to make it more sad. The title is "you belong to me" which is what the woman whispers to her spouse. They constantly revisit the place they first met on their anniversaries and during the night, they dance to the same song and she always whispers "you belong to me". One day she dies of a stroke (after 49th anniversary) and the man (70s by now) goes to the place they met, in their 50th and listens to the song they'd always dance to, while looking at old photos. When the song stops, he hears a whisper in his head, "you belong to me". Now how do I make it more sad? I'd love to share it but, I'm doing a young writers competition at one of my states university and I dont wanna have the story plagiarized before I send it to the judges and get disqualified.