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messages.content: im writing a cover letter for the following: 'Global Markets Division Summer Internship Programme London 2024
  Rolling deadline
  Internship
  Crédit Agricole Group
  London
  Investment Banking & Asset Management
  
  This Summer Internship Programme offers practical work experience in a large, global investment bank. You will be able to gain valuable insight into the Global Markets Division by being placed in a specific team, where you will further develop your skills and knowledge with guidance from business leaders and surrounding team.
  
  The eight - twelve-week programme will run during summer 2024. You will attend an induction and networking session during the first week. Throughout the programme, you will be assigned meaningful tasks by your team with clear objectives and responsibilities outlined weekly.
  
  This programme will be a hands on experience in order to help set you up for a successful career, once graduated. One of the teams you could be placed in:
  
  Electronic Client Connectivity
  Candidate criteria
  
  To be eligible for the programme, you must be an undergraduate who will be returning to University after you have completed the internship. No previous experience is required, we are looking for students who are intrigued and motivated to learn more about the technology and financial world and are committed to learning more about a specific business area.
  
  The below skills will be essential
  
  Analytical skills
  Team work
  Initiative and proactivity
  Proficient in MS Office tools (strong knowledge of Excel)
  Minimum level of study
  
  High school/Secondary school/A levels/AS levels/IB
  Training/Specialization
  
  Undergraduate
  Soft skills
  
  Analytical skills
  Team work
  Initiative and proactivity
  IT tools
  
  Proficient in MS Office tools (strong knowledge of Excel)
  About us
  
  Crédit Agricole CIB is the corporate and investment banking arm of Crédit Agricole Group, the 10th largest banking group worldwide in terms of balance sheet size (The Banker, July 2022). 8,600 employees in more than 30 countries across Europe, the Americas, Asia-Pacific, the Middle-East and North Africa, support the Bank's clients, meeting their financial needs throughout the world.
  
  Crédit Agricole CIB offers its large corporate and institutional clients a range of products and services in capital market activities, investment banking, structured finance, commercial banking and international trade. The Bank is a pioneer in the area of climate finance, and is currently a market leader in this segment with a complete offer for all its clients.' That is what I got from the job listing, I need to write a cover letter, please keep it to 3 paragraphs and structure: 1. why the company?, 2. why this division/team?, 3.why me as an individual? Also maybe include something niche from the company about how I want to work there like some news that not many applicants will know about. For reference, here's my CV- University of Newcastle Upon Tyne Sep 2022 - Jun 2025 BSc Physics with Astrophysics: Relevant modules include Scientific Computation with Python, Computational Methods for Theoretical Physics, Vector Calculus, Principles of Quantum Mechanics
  Energy Coast UTC
  A-Levels (A* - B): Engineering, Mathematics, Physics, Chemistry
  The Whitehaven Academy
  GCSE’s: 9 (A – C) grades including Mathematics and English language
  Work Experience & Projects
  Sellafield Ltd | Technical Degree Apprentice
  Sep 2018 - Jun 2020 Sep 2013 - Jun 2018
  Sep 2021 - Sep 2022
  • Utilized advanced Excel functions to analyse and interpret large datasets related to skill-fill optimization.
  • Developed detailed technical reports used at stakeholder meetings, summarizing trends, key findings and recommendations for project improvement.
  • Quickly adapted to evolving project requirements, modifying Excel models and reports to accommodate changing needs.
  • Actively coerced with senior management and subject matter experts across numerous departments to solve technical problems on site.
  Project | Market Analysis and Investment Strategy. Sep 2023 - Nov 2023
  • Analyzed the performance of the Eurozone bond market over a 12-month period, incorporating 5 years of historical datasets and data from economic indicators like inflation rate, interest rates etc.
  • Developed and implemented investment strategies, resulting in a 11% return on investment over 3 months.
  Project | System Automation Tool Aug 2023 - Sep 2023
  • Developed Python scripts for system automation tasks.
  • Implemented in Ubuntu, ensuring compatibility.
  • Optimized code for Linux systems and improved operational efficiency through
  automation.
  Skills & Achievements
  • Programming Languages: proficient in Python, MATLAB.
  • Investment Banking Technical Course: completed course acquiring skills in
  financial modelling and company valuation techniques.
  • Linux: proficient in Ubuntu.
  • IT: proficient in Microsoft Office, being advanced at Excel specifically.
  • Gold Duke of York award.
  Extra-Curricular
  Captain | Local Football League
  • Demonstrated teamwork and leadership skills as captain of a football team in a competitive league.
  • Active member of Newcastle University’s Investment Society.
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messages.content: Dear Hiring Manager,
  
  I am writing to express my interest in the Global Markets Division Summer Internship Programme 2024 at Crédit Agricole Group's London office. As an undergraduate student of Physics with Astrophysics at the University of Newcastle Upon Tyne, I am particularly drawn to Crédit Agricole CIB's pioneering work in climate finance and its commitment to sustainability. I am eager to contribute to the bank's mission of supporting its clients' financial needs while also making a positive impact on the environment.
  
  Having worked as a Technical Degree Apprentice at Sellafield Ltd, I have developed strong analytical skills and proficiency in using advanced Excel functions to analyze and interpret large datasets. I believe that these skills, along with my proficiency in Python and MATLAB, would be highly valuable in the Electronic Client Connectivity team. I am excited about the prospect of working in a team that is at the forefront of developing and implementing cutting-edge technology solutions to meet the evolving needs of the bank's clients.
  
  As an individual, I am highly motivated, proactive, and a team player. I have demonstrated my leadership skills as the captain of a local football league and my commitment to learning and personal development as an active member of Newcastle University's Investment Society. I am confident that these skills, combined with my technical expertise, make me an ideal candidate for this internship program.
  
  I am particularly impressed by Crédit Agricole CIB's recent recognition as the "Most Innovative Investment Bank in Western Europe" by Global Finance magazine. This achievement highlights the bank's commitment to innovation and its ability to stay ahead of the curve in a rapidly changing industry. I am excited about the opportunity to learn from and contribute to such a dynamic and innovative team.
  
  Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications and how I can contribute to the success of Crédit Agricole CIB.
  
  Sincerely,
  [Your Name]
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messages.content: No, it needs to be more, please keep it to 3 paragraphs and structure: 1. why the company?, 2. why this division/team?, 3.why me as an individual?
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messages.content: Dear Hiring Manager,
  
  I am writing to express my strong interest in the Global Markets Division Summer Internship Programme 2024 at Crédit Agricole Group's London office. As a physics student with a strong interest in finance and technology, I am particularly drawn to Crédit Agricole CIB's reputation as a leader in climate finance and its commitment to innovation. The bank's dedication to sustainability and its position as the 10th largest banking group worldwide make it an exciting and dynamic place to work.
  
  I am particularly interested in the Electronic Client Connectivity team as it presents an opportunity to combine my technical skills with my passion for finance. My experience as a Technical Degree Apprentice at Sellafield Ltd, where I utilized advanced Excel functions to analyze and interpret large datasets, has equipped me with the analytical skills necessary to excel in this role. Additionally, my proficiency in Python and MATLAB, as well as my completion of an Investment Banking Technical Course, have prepared me to contribute to the team's efforts in financial modeling and company valuation.
  
  As an individual, I am a quick learner, highly motivated, and proactive. I have demonstrated my teamwork and leadership skills as the captain of a local football league and my commitment to learning and personal development as an active member of Newcastle University's Investment Society. I am confident that my technical expertise, combined with my strong work ethic and eagerness to learn, make me an ideal candidate for this internship program.
  
  Furthermore, I am impressed by Crédit Agricole CIB's recognition as the "Most Innovative Investment Bank in Western Europe" by Global Finance magazine. This achievement highlights the bank's commitment to innovation and its ability to stay ahead of the curve in a rapidly changing industry. I am excited about the opportunity to learn from and contribute to such a dynamic and innovative team.
  
  Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to the opportunity to further discuss my qualifications and how I can contribute to the success of Crédit Agricole CIB.
  
  Sincerely,
  [Your Name]
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messages.content: definitely better, however I dont think it needs to say how my python skills will contribute since python won't be used in this role, Microsoft will, so strong excel skills obviously and the soft skills mentioned etc, but yeah good news