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messages.content: Can you check the following IELTS Writing Task 1 report? Give me feedback and tell my mistakes 
  
  Also, I want you to mark my essay as an IELTS writing examiner and provide the score breakdown in terms of task achievement, lexical resources, grammatical range and accuracy, and coherent and coherentCertain people are of the opinion that a few past buildings should be restored more than others. There are buildings like museums and temples that need to be preserved. I beleive that the advantages of preserving old buildings outwight the disadvantages because it helps to maintain the culture and traditions of the respective notions. I partly agree to both two ideas.
  In modern world,  beautiful and magnificent buildings are spring up just about in all the place. That constractions will have more been necessary of people for leave and also offices, type educational eyes, schools, kindergarden and again parkings are consisting here. Them may need each for the field and also important. On the one hand, nowadays, it is impossible not to do such cases. Because people are multipling to day by day, year by year. That's why, suit them maybe all the buildings. These new buildings are transfiguring other old buildings. For example, the mausoleum and historical memories. 
  On the other hand, old building's break down of no well for statment. Because it buildings are bringing more benefit behivour other countrie's of tourism which the government give much money by them. For example, in China is the great wall of china. Millions people have gone for travelling over there. Mainly, historical memory besides might be reminder to childern from background.
  In conclusion, I think that old building need save similar to museum. Because it benefit the state more and provide empoyment to majority people.
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messages.content: Your essay is well-structured and presents a clear argument, but there are several areas where improvements can be made to enhance your score in an IELTS Writing Task 1 report. Here's a breakdown of the mistakes and suggestions for improvement:
  
  1. Task Achievement (4/5): You have addressed the topic and presented your opinion, but the introduction could be more engaging and provide a clear thesis statement. Also, you could have provided more specific examples to support your argument.
  
  2. Lexical Resources (3.5/5): Your vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some errors and repetition. For example, "magnificent buildings" and "beautiful buildings" can be replaced with a single term like "impressive" or "stunning." Also, "constractions" should be "construction," and "transfiguring" should be "transforming."
  
  3. Grammatical Range and Accuracy (3.5/5): There are some grammatical errors throughout the essay, such as subject-verb agreement issues, run-on sentences, and incorrect verb tenses. For example, "These new buildings are transfiguring other old buildings" should be "These new buildings are transforming other old buildings."
  
  4. Coherence and Cohesion (3.5/5): Your essay is generally coherent, but there are some areas where the flow could be improved. For example, the transition between the first and second paragraph could be smoother, and the conclusion could summarize the main points more effectively.
  
  Overall, I would give you a score of 6.5 for this essay. To improve your score, focus on improving your grammar, vocabulary, and coherence, and make sure to provide specific examples to support your argument. Good luck with your IELTS exam!
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messages.content: Can you check the following IELTS Writing Task 1 report? Give me feedback and tell my mistakes 
  
  Also, I want you to mark my essay as an IELTS writing examiner and provide the score breakdown in terms of task achievement, lexical resources, grammatical range and accuracy, and coherent and coherentThe pie charts illustrates average indecatorsin sodium, saturated fats and joined sugars of typical foods consumed in the USA
  In genrally, in sodium shows different meals.
  There is at most low the snacks and its against  dinner while saturated fat any at most high shows dinner and snacks is higher compared to last sodium.
  There is of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar graphics. In sodium reveales breakfast and snacks both of it 14% which lunch is higher to 15% from its. Dinner is at most tall so depictes 43%.
  In saturated fat demonstrates lower compare to other quantities and it is 21%, as for dinner is bigger in result 37%. The very end in added sugar special depictes in the mutation. Breakfast is in bad level than other indicators and it is 16%. However, in added sugar grew up snacks and became 42%.