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Many times, simply reading your own words aloud helps you correct mistakes you might have overlooked. You'll be able to notice where you've used words that are grammatically incorrect or overly formal language.  Reading out loud will also help you hear sentences that are unclear, confusing or awkward. If you're using this statement for multiple programs, reread to make sure that your statement is effective for each program. You will probably need to tweak the statement somewhat for each program. " The best personal statements have emotional power, as well as practical life application. Read your statement to yourself, and imagine asking the question, "So what?" at the conclusion. If you don't feel you have a clear answer to this question, keep working until you do.  The question may lead you into a deeper understanding of the reason you chose the way of writing your personal statement as you did. Most schools want to know not only about your personal experiences, but how those experiences have changed you as a person. This information won't be found in the beginning of your personal statement. Once you've completed your personal statement, reread the start. Make sure that start of your statement has a kernel of the way your statement will end. The best reader will be someone who knows you well, but who is also able to consider what the school might want to hear. Allow the reader to offer their honest feedback. Her criticism will help you learn, even if you disagree with it.  Be specific when asking for feedback. If all you want is someone to check your spelling and grammar, let your reader know this. Ask your reader to tell you what your central message was in your personal statement. If your reader isn't sure, your statement isn't clear enough.

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Read your statement aloud. Ask yourself, "So what? Ask someone else to read your statement.