I don't like the way the text was written. You should have organized the policies by company, and also used appropriate labels for each bullet point you wrote.

For example:

### Microsoft:
* Privacy policy: (...)
* Data collection: (...)
* Controversies / scandals: (...)
* Privacy in products: (...)

### Apple:
* Privacy policy: (...)
* Data collection: (...)
* Controversies / scandals: (...)
* Privacy in products: (...)

**Overview:** (...)

Please follow my suggestion and improve your answer. **Use appropriate markdown or I will downvote your reply**.
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