1.  I used the "our new rabbit" is a metaphor for regular exercising, but it was a bit of a stretch. How about this:

"No more excesses or unhealthy habits,
But wellness and balance like an abbot?"

It would also serve as word play, with "abbot" being "a head monk" and "habit" also referring "a monk's religious clothing"?

2. I can see that the rhyming scheme in the final line is a bit off, how about I change it to:

"We're focused, calm too hypnotic,
No longer a pig, in a cage on antibiotics."
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