gpt
Subaru:  He instinctively started holding his breath and walking softly as he entered the room.
human
Subaru:  “I’m getting too poetic for my own good.” He felt exasperated with himself as he drew a chair next to the bed and sat down.
gpt
Subaru:  “Sorry for coming here only after everything else. There were a few problems to take care of first… No, sorry, I’m just making excuses.” Taking Rem’s hand as she slept, he squeezed it gently and started to talk.
human
Rem:  Naturally, there was no response from Rem.
gpt
Subaru:  Subaru didn’t expect anything different even as he talked to her, and his expression was peaceful.