"删掉句子“The exhibition was shocked by the audience's loud applause”中多余的词" 中没有多余的词。每个词在这个句子里都有其作用。

但如果你是想让我删除原句子 “The exhibition was shocked by the audience's loud applause” 中的多余的词, 我可以帮助您。

原文:
The exhibition was shocked by the audience's loud applause.

修改后:
The audience applauded loudly at the exhibition.
删掉句子“The exhibition was shocked by the audience's loud applause”中多余的词。