The biurnal beats were perfect, but the voice at the end was really jarring and the commercial music following the voice was awful. Why not just keep the biurnal beats? I came here for them and it was fantastic. The rest just is really jarring and doesn't go at all with the biurnal part of the video. The first 90 percent of the video gets you into a wonderful  space, and then suddenly it's like BAM here's this loud voice and terrible music that makes you feel like you're whole body is suddenly under attack. PLEASE JUST DO THE BEATS
Next time, maybe try a longer track? :) Also, seems like you're listening with the volume too high. The sound at the end should be gentle!
hmmmno