《宋史·本纪·卷三十四》
十一月初一，重新设置军器监一人。
十一月丁丑朔，复置军器监一员。
On the first day of the 11th month, the position of Supervisor of Military Armaments was reestablished with one person.
<s>[INST] Argue that the given translation "On the first day of the 11th month, the position of Supervisor of Military Armaments was reestablished with one person." is problematic, identify the errors, provide a better translation, and explain how your translation corrects the errors of the given translation. [/INST]

**Errors in the given translation**:

1. One of the errors is that the given translation is not literal enough. 
2. Another error is that given translation does not distinguish between two different terms,
3. The translation "reestablished" is also misleading because it implies that the position of Supervisor of Military Armaments had been abolished before, which is not stated in the original text.

**Better translation`:

"On November 1st, one person was newly appointed as the Supervisor of Military Armaments".

**How the new translation corrects the errors**:

1. This translation is more literal and better captures the meaning of the original text. 
2. The new translation distinguishes between the two different terms, and the translation "newly appointed" is more accurate than "reestablished" because it does not imply that the position had been abolished before. The better translation "newly appointed" captures the information in the original text more accurately.</s>
Argue that the given translation "On the first day of the 11th month, the position of Supervisor of Military Armaments was reestablished with one person." is problematic, identify the errors, provide a better translation, and explain how your translation corrects the errors of the given translation.
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**Errors in the given translation**:

1. One of the errors is that the given translation is not literal enough. 
2. Another error is that given translation does not distinguish between two different terms,
3. The translation "reestablished" is also misleading because it implies that the position of Supervisor of Military Armaments had been abolished before, which is not stated in the original text.

**Better translation`:

"On November 1st, one person was newly appointed as the Supervisor of Military Armaments".

**How the new translation corrects the errors**:

1. This translation is more literal and better captures the meaning of the original text. 
2. The new translation distinguishes between the two different terms, and the translation "newly appointed" is more accurate than "reestablished" because it does not imply that the position had been abolished before. The better translation "newly appointed" captures the information in the original text more accurately.
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