Seaside Prayer
This is lovely <PERSON>, some gorgeous shots of the pier and a very interesting subject matter, which I believe is explored in an insightful, creative and informed way. Technically, it is very good, sound is mostly pretty good and as far as I can see, shots are all in focus etc. Only things that I would maybe say are that you could perhaps utilise some music to propel it along a little bit, and like someone else said, perhaps some motivated lighting could help the 'laptop scenes' look a bit more whole and fleshed out. You could also maybe even turn it into more of a narrative thing, building a little more of the guy's character, although what is there is great! Excited to see more of your films, really enjoyed this one! :D 647