I really wanna help you, but your challenges require so much paraphrasing that I can't do much more than just pointing out errors without providing a solid fix since I'm not a native. I really recommend that you read more Norwegian texts to get a feel for word order and idiomatic phrasing, and actually look at conjugation charts and declensions; your grammar is very wanting, but Scandi grammar is grug-tier so it wouldn't exactly be demanding to grind those inflections - it would be beneficial if you just started memorizing grammar.