Good pic! But only John Smith's is English!
A bit dark and hard to see Author: the rim lighting is nice, but in my opinion you might have tried a bit of fill lighting on the face to brighten up the label and remove the heavy shadows.
I like the the side lighting and shadows is casts. But it would have greatly enhanced the picture to add some soft lighting to the front in order to bring out the label more.
A kwakske , recommended! Good luck!