sentences:  Work on a second draft began on 14 August 1985 and was completed by 22 August 1985, with a third draft submitted on 11 September 1985.Saward spent much time with Halliwell on further drafts, changing the name of the Freds to Trikes.The fourth revision was delivered on 26 September 1985 and 7 October 1985 saw a fifth draft arrive at the production office.