Too many errors

First, the writing was rudimentary. But the conflict involving the co-worker was interesting enough to rate it three stars. Unfortunately, there were too many errors. The antagonist was called by the wrong name (Amanda instead of Tori). At least twice in the book it referenced the main characters having boys when in fact they had a boy and a girl. Furthermore, there was a sex scene in which the male leading character said he didn't want to hurt the baby (from his penetration)- but the woman was not pregnant. Lastly, I'm not sure if it was formatting issues or a bad cut and paste job that caused sentences from previous paragraphs to be repeated out of context. I wanted to rate this book higher but these mistakes are indicative of sloppy writing and editing.

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