Repetitive monologues with over dramatic characters

I wanted to like this book. The story is cute, the sexy scenes are well done... But overall, the book reads like a cheesy, overly worded, Hallmark movie with overly excited/dramatic characters that don't feel real enough to invest in. The character descriptions are beyond lacking, I cannot even begin to imagine what Autumn and Holden look like because all we're given is their hair color, and her dress size. They keep repeating the same things in their inner monologues over and over again, making a huge deal out of the amount of time that passed between meeting to actually dating (even though it was only 6 weeks), and the passage of day to day events that are made note of don't line up correctly from sentence to sentence. I quit at the halfway mark because I am annoyed with the writing. I want to keep reading and find out what happens in the end... But I feel like the time I've already put into reading this was work rather than pleasure. 😞

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