Foreshadowing sentences at end of chapters have to go

The stories are interesting if a bit predictable but that’s ok. What I find off-putting is the foreshadowing at the end of almost ever chapter. It’s an unnecessary sentence and you’re writing in the present and the future with just that one sentence. It throws off the flow of the stories and I’m not sure why your beta readers didn’t tell you to take it out. The books would flow beautifully without them.

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