Needs editing

The plot was good enough to keep me reading despite the poor writing. Though the spelling and grammar is pretty good, this book needs a lot of editing. It's repetitive and often contradictory. It's supposed to be a realistic story, but people control their heart rate, and an addition that was built onto a house 3 years ago has a basement that juts out from the rest of the building. You can't tell me no one noticed her digging that. I knew who the kidnapper was by about 40% on, and even though the author tried to lay a false trail, I was right. Bottom line: this could be a good book with a lot of editing.

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