Not what it seems

First I have to say that the grammar was impeccable. I am a prolific reader and good grammar impresses me. The story , not so much. What I read was a story about two college graduates sticking their toes into the real world. A lot of time was spent building up background information which slowed the read down, in my opinion. It finally came together in the last dozen or so paragraphs. That all being said, I am giving a neutral review here.

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