Full of errors; needs editing

I preordered this book, not realizing it was a re-release (the synopsis didn't include the notice about it being reissue until recently), and unfortunately, it wouldn't allow me to return. It isn't drastically changed from its initial release, and the mistakes are just as abundant. Misplaced and misused commas are extremely common, and I found it really distracting. I don't mind repurchasing a book if there are updates, especially if the editing is improved, but it seems almost worse. I like this author, but her technical skills aren't great--this isn't a terrible thing for authors, as that is what an editor or even a friendly proof reader is for. She is a good story teller, but her writing is often lazy, and it shows here. I do not recommend this book, particularly if you purchased its previous release. It is overpriced, rough, and just not the quality I expect from this author.

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