Sweet story, but a little unbelievable in parts

I did enjoy this story. I like the writing. There were no grammatical errors. The romance was sweet, if a little rushed. Ella was so gullible though. She couldn't believe that her stepmother could be bad or do anything to sabotage her, and kept denying it until she saw the truth. It was hard for me to see her be so gullible and immediately dismiss any warning her trusted friend gave her. The ending seemed a little rushed but I'm glad they had a happy ending.

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