Rolled my eyes

The writing style is good, excellent pace, I liked the basic story and the dilemma they were facing, his to lose it all for love and hers to take the risk he wants her for her money and not for love. The problem was that the story was not believable, it couldn't happened like this. Lizzie didn't act like a strong woman and she didn't act like she is living in Regency Times . Hugo was disappointing, treating her the way he did is not acceptable and demonstrates lack of character. Towards the end when she told him what she think of him I couldn't agree with her more so the grand gesture he did at the end was there so we can have our happy ending but it wasn't something I saw coming and it felt forced. Their main connection was physical and a lot of the story revolved around that.

###

