Good book.

It could have been a lot better if the author had been a bit more careful. If you're going to write a story about people who speak Spanish, at least make sure that the Spanish you use is real Spanish. You were careless and your Spanish was not Spanish at all; you should have used someone who spoke the language to edit and correct your Spanish use. It was terrible. However, the story line was interesting, the yarn was attractive, and the characters were likable. Your lack of care made your work seem sophomoric.

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