Needs fleshing out.

I like the setting and Stat mechanics but I came away feeling like I read the Cliffs Notes version. At the end of the book I couldn't form a single clear picture of a single place or person... Maybe the slime girl. I hope the author spends a bit more time on the character and world development. I'm not asking him to spend 3 pages describing a chair like Stephen King but I like more backstory and insights into the characters. I'd also like more info about places. Not just.. A town that bigger than the last town with a better wall around it.

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