Cliffhanger--like the old serial movies of the 1940s & 50s.

There's a lot of potential in the plot, but it isn't fully realized because of careless editing. Timelines are broken and inconsistent, and worst of all (for me anyway), it's a serial. The last page doesn't end the story. It sets the stage for potentially endless continuation. If you're in to that kind of reading, then have at it. I'm not.

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