Well....

Ok, it is quite clear that this author is not from the US. If only someone (author, proofreader, editor...?) had realized how many times descriptions and words were used incorrectly because of that. There is no way to really get into this story because you keep getting thrown off by incorrect vernacular. I do not recommend this for anyone who prefers the correct use of customs/language/slang/etc. for the country/region that the story is set in. It has potential but needs more work.

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