I'm glad it was free, now I'd like to get my time refunded

I'm very glad I got this for free, as I haven't lost any money. Unfortunately the same cannot be said for time. The writing was better than most that I've read lately, but not good enough to merit a higher rating. The story was incomplete, as it is just a teaser for the later books (which I will forego). None of the characters had any depth or feeling to them, and the plot was confused and incomplete. There may be some interesting ideas here, but without the other two books there is no way to tell.

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