Potentially a fine story

This was an over the top kind of story. It was silly and funny and engaging . Could be enhanced by an editor and a proofreader. Such as pocketbook being a N.American term. In Britain it means notebook. Also, he is the Viscount. How would a cook have the nerve to shoo him out of his own kitchen? At another point it is said her returns across the lawn to the house. But this does not work. What he does is return to the stables. There's the usual missing words and wrong words. The biggest objection I have is a mystery that is presented but never resolved. This cousin George preceded the H and retrieved the H's orders. This is never explained. How did he know where to go? WHY did he do this? This is way too big a piece of the plot to leave undone and dangling !

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