I couldn't finish it

There are some books that are intriguing enough (even with a few faults) that I'll keep reading. This is not one of those. I honestly felt like I was reading an outline that was being filled out in preparation for writing a story. Even the continuity between paragraphs was disjointed and down right jarring. I should have read the reviews first. One review suggested a reading level of tenth grade- at times that might be generous. I do't know who the editor was but he/she did a disservice to the author and the reading public by allowing this to be published. If there was no editor then the author is fully to blame. As another review suggested, I am not inclined to try another book by the same author . So it went to mys slush pile- I wish it had gone to someone else's before Amazon.

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