Confusing, Choppy and Repetitious

i really wanted to like this series, in the beginning, Cassie and Deke started out as a good love story, in a impossible situation, but very quickly, the story takes a turn..its all over the place, missing parts of sentences, so choppy. Most of the story involves, the same awful things happening over and over again. Cassie being kidnapped, right out of the MC club, not once but multiple times, when all the members are guarding her..yea no, crying, same story line, same hits, different people.. this MC club is suppost to be hard core, far from it..the dialog is between the members and old ladies, etc. is just bad! I didn't finish, I just couldnt..

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