Ok its problematic

i loved the first book. it was great, but as i progressed i started to dislike them. they became boring and stupid. the plot lines were all jumbled up and the grammar was off. i mean i might be 13 but i am writing a novel that people say is going to be big, i think i know when something is not right. yes i dont know everything but being in a very advanced reading and writing level makes me at least know somes facts. it is a good book though if you like this kind of stuff. it was an off-trail for me.

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