so many typos it doesnt just need an editor, it needs a rewrite

I cannot figure out where the positive reviews are all coming from, maybe an audible version or something. there are typos all over, using of instead of off then instead of them, and countless others. I ended up re-reading a lot because I couldn’t figure out what was happening. It goes beyond an editor to needing, in my opinion, a rewrite. Add to that, the author doesn’t even follow his own magic math (or at least he doesn’t seem to) Douglas is regenerating 13 mana per hour yet he is running around throwing spells that are described as costing ten points all over the place. Or he is using man to tunnel around to avoid the monsters on the surface, he stops because his mana is empty, and then starts again because his mana is full. but by my estimation that would take 10 hours, yet earlier it describes his dirt turned air as returning to dirt in seconds. How is he keeping it air over the course of hours? But all that said some of it is still rather humorous.

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