Hmm... I did like it, but...

I like the couple of stories by Milly that I have read. I did enjoy this story. But, this desperately needs a good editor. Desperately. It seems like she just pounded this out and didn’t even do a reread to check it out. There are two male leads and you often can’t tell who is talking, including Harlow, the female lead. I had to reread paragraphs to figure it out. Paragraph breaks make no sense in several places. Only a few typos, yay. I really hate to be negative because authors usually work hard to deliver a good story. But I am paying money for this. I will continue to read stories by Milly in the future.

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