Charming story and locale, badly in need of an editor!

The premise was interesting and the main characters were mostly likeable. But in the end, I felt the book was unfinished and unsatisfying. The descriptions of places were well fleshed out, easy to imagine. But the characters and the point of them being in the story often seemed unfinished, and events not fully explained or flat out didn't tie together well. The worst, most distracting thing though was errors of every imaginable sort. Sentences that didn't make sense, misspellings, incorrect use of apostrophes, misuse of your/you're, misunderstanding of common expressions or words and so on. I didn't hate the book, but I was disappointed, it deserved more depth and continuity.

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