already losing interest

It was pretty captivating in the beginning, but towards the middle somewhere it seems like she lost that spark and got lazy. I feel like I'm reading a book of cheesy cliches whenever theres supposed to a build up to a suspenseful or dramatic scene. it's mostly in Flora's chapters I start to feel this way. Maybe if I finish the whole thing it'll get better, but for now I can't help roll my eyes overtime she tries come up with a snappy comeback

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