Well it just never got to the level of "great" as with the earlier books

Seemed to be rushed in the beginning chapters and just did not move anywhere. The book described the female demon over and over again. I was getting very tired of the trap that a rookie writer falls into. Also many of the character interactions we not smooth as in previous books. The author created the characters and can make them do whatever. So what was the point of the demon's intimate contact with certain character and their soul not get corrupted? I mean come on, after the play up of her having her "demonic body" how did it not corrupt what it touched? Not well thought out. Also the demon was to be sooooo smart with plans inside of plans, yet it turns into a three move checker game and not a battle of the brains chess match. The story right now doesn't seem to be written with the end in sight. This book seemed thrown together or a side thought. It just had so much in the story line but the fragments not touched are legion. (pun intended) Definitely not what I have come to expect from the author.

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