Three yellow stars

The bones to a story are here for sure, but first it needs to be proof read and edited properly. April/Lisa the counselor; meaning both names used, countless botched sentences, timelines need to be scrutinized (takes an hour to drive somewhere but she is there instantly). I read Spilled Milk and it did not contain any of these grievances. This book feels hurried, fragmented and frankly I stopped reading it at the chapter about Jackson. I really wanted to like it. I could feel the story there, just got bogged down in the lack of attention to detail. Per say instead of per se. It just needs more work.

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